写作微技能
读后续写思维拓展训练之19——增强表现力之二
运用富有表现力的形容词和副词
恰当地使用富有表现力的形容词和副词，能够使文章更加丰富多彩，描写地更为准确，文章更有生机。使用这些形容词和副词时，要注意把握这些词汇的确切内涵，符合故事发展的内在逻辑。
佳句观摩
1.他给了我一个微笑。
一般句：He gave me a smile.
提升句：He gave me a bright smile, with his eyes sparkling (一个灿烂的微笑，眼睛闪闪发光)．
2．他点了点头。
一般句：He nodded.
提升句：With apparently unwilling affection (带着显然不情愿的神情), he nodded.
3．我凝视着他们渐渐远去的身影。
一般句：I gazed at their receding figures.
提升句：I gazed affectionately (深情地) at their receding figures.
4．拉斐尔向我们打招呼，并分享了他的故事，这让我很惊讶。
一般句：Greeting us, Rafael shared his story, which left me surprised.
提升句：Greeting us with a confident smile (带着自信的微笑), Rafael shared his story in a magnetic voice (用一种磁性的声音), which left me surprised.
