1.使用词组代替整句或者从句。
Beautiful mountains like Mount Tai, Lushan Mountain, and Mount Huang, were visited by only a few people in the past.Today, better wages, holidays with pay, new hotels on these mountains, and better train and bus services, have brought them within reach of many who never thought of visiting them ten years ago.
→Beautiful mountains like Mount Tai, once visited by only a few people, are today accessible to many, thanks to better wages, paid holidays, new hotels and better transportation services.
2.使用概括性的词代替具体的词。
She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek and some textbooks.She intended to read all of them during the winter vocation.
→She brought home a lot of books to read during the vocation.
3.运用主从复合句合并信息:主从复合句即我们常用的名词性从句、状语从句和定语从句。可根据信息的不同作用选择不同的从句进行合并信息。
We'll also spend some fun time together, singing, dancing and playing games.We hope it will make them happy.
→We'll also spend some fun time together,which we hope will make them happy.