第1招 亮点词汇星光闪耀——闪闪阅卷老师的“眼”
高考阅卷通常在1分钟内阅完一篇习作,由于长时间阅卷带来的疲劳,大众化的词汇只能让阅卷老师感到越来越困乏。但如果一篇作文中有几个不落俗套的高级词汇,则会让阅卷老师眼前一亮、精神一振,作文增分提档自在情理之中。
一、使用亮点词汇的4个思考角度
1.“语”众不同,避免人云亦云
写作时,恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达,会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。
①To be honest, his help has a great impact on me.
→To be honest, his assistance has a great impact on me. (2020·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)
②I think it's a good idea.It's a chance to make the Chinese culture better known to international students.
→I think it's a good idea.It's an opportunity to make the Chinese culture better known to international students.(2019·江苏高考书面表达)
③I'm busy with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is very important to me, is near.
→I'm occupied with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is of great importance to me, is around the corner.(2017·天津高考书面表达)